Am fascinated by the ideas and coming together of story. Not sure where it's going, bit like some water flowing down bare earth perhaps being driven by an assortment of writers/thinkers, it need not matter, though I've felt a desire to know the destination, like a river heading for the sea. Twill get there!
I like almost all the ideas. Interesting there's different levels - ground, underground, sub (what level?). Wonder if Room3 might be in sky, though the engineers shed is great. But that platform up high - sky?
Interesting too that past/present/future are all mooted, as is a timeless element. The mystery thriller could be, what will happen to planet earth's water next? answers on P.4 of your evaluation sheet please. At any rate, I am hoping we end up with Local/Global elements. It would be really good to get the environmental preciousness of (a drop of) water including a look at or warning into issues of the future, while exploring the local domination of Wimborne by water - 2 rivers, bridges, past floodings, flood plains, water under houses, the upgrading of the Edwardian water main - where does all this come in our journey through the PH?
How about the snow of the last 2 winters? Ageless, timeless fun with crystalised water.
Remember the idea of taking the audience to the PH having assembled them elsewhere? What if we could transport them there all in a double decker kitted out as a rocket/sub/WW2 evacuees train/drainpipe...? This could be a lovely pre-scene. All arrive together and into R1.
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